来自《写作160篇》范文
The picture shows the pollution caused by chimneys of the factories in cities. Often, the sky is covered by large clouds of smoke from chimneys. The air is nearly suffocating, especially in the evening as it becomes cold and the smoke is spreading everywhere. The scene reminds us of the end of the world.
From the picture we can infer that the drawer of the picture intends to convey to the readers that unplanned fa首席技术官ries has brought about great hazards to the city air condition. Due to planning mistakes, fa首席技术官ries were usually placed in the center of cities, among residential and business districts. Besides, nearly every block has several chimneys for the heating system, which makes the whole city immersed in thick columns of smoke. As a result, respiratory diseases have been reported to be rising and old people dying of the worsening air pollution.
Pollution is really a hot issue in the world. If we don’t take useful measures, we may live in terrible surroundings, and some unexpected results may come out in the end. So, what we should do is to bring down the problems caused by chimneys. For one thing, fa首席技术官ries with chimneys should be moved out of the center of the city and it should be made sure that the waste gases are at least not poisonous. For another, other means of heating should be developed to stop using coal. In a word, in the city there should be no coal, no chimney, and no smoke to pollute the air.
画面体现了城市中工厂的烟囱带来的污染。都会里的空中时时是浓烟密布，氛围使人窒息，尤其是在傍晚，因天气冷，烟雾很快紧锁开来。这画面让咱们想起世界末日。
从图画中,我们笼统猜度作者是想向读者传布未规划的工场给都邑氛围带来伟大损害。因为规划的失误，工场大多建于市核心、居民区与贸易区。而且，几乎每个街区的供暖核心都有好几个烟囱，使得整个都市上空充溢黑烟。结果，患呼吸道疾病的人愈来愈多，许多暮年人死于空气的很有问题净化。
污染是一个天下性的热门标题问题。假设我们不接纳无效顺序，我们将保存在一个十分可怕的环境里。着末一些意想不到的结果也会随之而来。因此，咱们理当削减烟囱带来的标题问题。一方面，有烟囱的工厂应该搬出市中心而且确保排放的气体是无毒的，另外一方面，理当用其它类型的供热承办煤的点火。反正，城市里该当无煤，无烟囱，无烟传染氛围。
【说话解释】
①chimney n.烟囱
②suffocating n.使人呼吸难题的，使人梗塞的
③hazard n.挫伤，风险
④immerse v.使某物吞没于液体中，沉浸
⑤respiratory a.呼吸的，呼吸感召的
⑥come out 充塞
【结构亮点】“感叹词性从句作主语”句式：
What we should do is to bring down the problems caused by chimneys.我们理当减少烟囱带来的问题。
【写作思绪】
这是一篇针对感染的看图作文。作者于首段就图片进行说明，接下来综合沾染会带来的
一些终究，收尾给出建议步伐，计划标题。逻辑稳重，档次相熟，条理明晰。
